Sprinkled by moon dust / Blessed excited inclusion / A long to belong @josepf

You are gone

We said goodbye

just yesterday

but you were

already gone

***

You left us with

some final thoughts

so much

to reflect upon

I know that you are

high indeed

flying above

and beyond

A love for you

it’s source will be

a love

to depend on

Photos : Lic Creative Commons

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Cyril Breton

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5 Responses

  1. This reminded me of a friend that died when I was a teenager. She wrote her own service, chose the music, made a cassette recording – my friend and the service remain strong memories.

    March 6, 2010 at 11:01 pm

  2. the last stanza stroke me so much.
    almost like closure, it’s petrifying:

    “A love for you

    it’s source will be

    a love

    to depend on”

    wow :)

    xx

    March 7, 2010 at 2:12 am

  3. beautiful…sorrow is omething we can all relate to. i like that last line as well…

    March 7, 2010 at 3:41 am

  4. awe Leslie this was sweet, nearly got the hankies out, very well written poem xxx

    March 7, 2010 at 1:54 pm

  5. Pam

    I love these photographs. The color is so intense, the images beautiful. I enjoyed the poem too. I was sorry, however, to see the tag on death. I didn’t view this poem as a final goodbye. It reminded me of how I feel each day about my kids. My eldest left home nearly 10 years ago, but I miss him everyday!!! Indeed, he is flying high. The career he is building for himself is most successful. And, the memories of our time together when he was a child and the times we do spend together where now we are friends more than parent and child are what we depend on in the lonely moments between our visits. So I will squint the next time I scroll down to leave a comment. I prefer to take away my own message from your this amazing poetry and photography.

    March 8, 2010 at 12:47 pm

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