Comments on: The Park Bench (adapted from Scarlet Letter Revisited)

By: Baino

Baino — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 22:41:41 +0000

Aww I hate stories of unrequited love, I’m such a romantic at heart. I like the way you’re not obvious about their point of difference, class, race, background . .although you hint at a mother’s dubious past but it still leaves it nicely open to interpretation.

By: moondustwriter

moondustwriter — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 19:03:33 +0000

yep a heartbreak a second

By: Kavita

Kavita — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 16:43:38 +0000

ofcourse it is!

By: moondustwriter

moondustwriter — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 19:06:03 +0000

he carries a heavy weight for sure

By: moondustwriter

moondustwriter — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 19:05:43 +0000

glad you liked it my dear

By: moondustwriter

moondustwriter — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 19:05:30 +0000

Thanks MM

By: moondustwriter

moondustwriter — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 19:05:21 +0000

real life and real sadness

By: California Girl

California Girl — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 18:52:51 +0000

Well written. I kept going. I can picture his grief as blatant as the letter A on her chest.

By: Mama Zen

Mama Zen — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 18:05:36 +0000

What a lovely take on the theme!

By: Monkey Man

Monkey Man — Thu, 22 Jul 2010 17:49:57 +0000

You are so good.