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The Giant (microfiction in 160)

July 25, 2010 by moondustwriter

She opened her eyes

what did she see?

A giant

the size of the sea.

He had hands

so big and strong,

but his moon size smile told her

nothing was wrong.

She smiled back.

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Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged giant, kindness, microfiction, monkey man, moondustwriter, smile | 19 Comments

19 Responses

on July 25, 2010 at 4:39 pm caty

Aww the giant sounds sweet…lovely 160!
- on July 25, 2010 at 7:45 pm moondustwriter
  
  the gentle giant
on July 25, 2010 at 4:42 pm slpmartin

Such an array of interesting images…I rather liked your structure on this one.
- on July 25, 2010 at 7:45 pm moondustwriter
  
  thanks my friend – moon smiles
on July 25, 2010 at 5:19 pm waystationone

i think i would smile back too…as big as the sea? a fun 160…
- on July 25, 2010 at 7:45 pm moondustwriter
  
  thanks Bri- I have to be light sometimes – huh
on July 25, 2010 at 5:45 pm Kavita

A sweet smile can make the most dangerous giant look so gentle..
“moon size smile” – totally loved it
A charming and lovable 160
- on July 25, 2010 at 7:44 pm moondustwriter
  
  yeh that moon has a big one
on July 25, 2010 at 5:48 pm Jingle

cute and fun…

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/sunday-160-iywhy.html

mine is kind of crazy…
Happy Sunday!
- on July 25, 2010 at 7:44 pm moondustwriter
  
  crazy is good
on July 25, 2010 at 6:46 pm Monkey Man

Once again you struck a chord with me. Reminds me of a tale my mom told me when I was a little boy. Great 160 and thank you for being part of it.
- on July 25, 2010 at 7:44 pm moondustwriter
  
  Always love your 160s
on July 25, 2010 at 9:08 pm Talon

loved the “moon size smile” – and loved that he was a gentle giant.
- on July 26, 2010 at 5:53 am moondustwriter
  
  there have to be some gentle giants
on July 25, 2010 at 10:38 pm Tony Single

Hey, me and the giant be cool if he don’t go sittin’ on me or nothin’.
- on July 26, 2010 at 5:53 am moondustwriter
  
  I’ll speak to the giant for ya
on July 26, 2010 at 8:41 am Jingle

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/25/thursday-poets-rally-week-25-poetry-awards/

Rally week 25 awards,
thanks for the comment for my 160.
Happy Monday!
- on July 26, 2010 at 10:26 am moondustwriter
  
  Happy Mon back at ya ji
on July 26, 2010 at 6:59 pm Just Me

Nice, this one made me smile!
-C