The Giant (microfiction in 160)
She opened her eyes
what did she see?
A giant
the size of the sea.
He had hands
so big and strong,
but his moon size smile told her
nothing was wrong.
She smiled back.
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Aww the giant sounds sweet…lovely 160!
July 25, 2010 at 4:39 pm
the gentle giant
July 25, 2010 at 7:45 pm
Such an array of interesting images…I rather liked your structure on this one.
July 25, 2010 at 4:42 pm
thanks my friend – moon smiles
July 25, 2010 at 7:45 pm
i think i would smile back too…as big as the sea? a fun 160…
July 25, 2010 at 5:19 pm
thanks Bri- I have to be light sometimes – huh
July 25, 2010 at 7:45 pm
A sweet smile can make the most dangerous giant look so gentle..
“moon size smile” – totally loved it
A charming and lovable 160
July 25, 2010 at 5:45 pm
yeh that moon has a big one
July 25, 2010 at 7:44 pm
cute and fun…
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/sunday-160-iywhy.html
mine is kind of crazy…
Happy Sunday!
July 25, 2010 at 5:48 pm
crazy is good
July 25, 2010 at 7:44 pm
Once again you struck a chord with me. Reminds me of a tale my mom told me when I was a little boy. Great 160 and thank you for being part of it.
July 25, 2010 at 6:46 pm
Always love your 160s
July 25, 2010 at 7:44 pm
A wonderful 160…I should try it once…you inspire me
July 25, 2010 at 7:48 pm
loved the “moon size smile” – and loved that he was a gentle giant.
July 25, 2010 at 9:08 pm
there have to be some gentle giants
July 26, 2010 at 5:53 am
Hey, me and the giant be cool if he don’t go sittin’ on me or nothin’.
July 25, 2010 at 10:38 pm
I’ll speak to the giant for ya
July 26, 2010 at 5:53 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/25/thursday-poets-rally-week-25-poetry-awards/
Rally week 25 awards,
thanks for the comment for my 160.
Happy Monday!
July 26, 2010 at 8:41 am
Happy Mon back at ya ji
July 26, 2010 at 10:26 am
Nice, this one made me smile!
-C
July 26, 2010 at 6:59 pm