Sprinkled by moon dust / Blessed excited inclusion / A long to belong @josepf

Times are hard(MicroFiction Monday)

My, My

The bills have been piling up.

I’m sorry it’s been a lean winter, dear.

It’s been worse for many.

Things will improve

with spring.

Susan at Stony is a wonderful hostess of Micro Fiction Monday. She gives us wonderful photo prompt and generously gives us 140 characters to tell a story. Come join the fun

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33 Responses

  1. Jim

    I enjoyed reading this. It is almost sad.
    Optimism sure does help matters doesn’t it! Especially in the Spring. :)
    Poor folks, but “Things will improve.”
    ..

    August 22, 2010 at 10:53 pm

    • moondustwriter

      Thanks Jim “things will improve”

      August 23, 2010 at 8:31 pm

  2. Well you’ve told the story of many a family around the globe these days…well done.

    August 22, 2010 at 10:59 pm

    • moondustwriter

      Sadly happening too frequently

      August 23, 2010 at 8:30 pm

  3. Lean, indeed! Some men are so unobservant . . .

    August 22, 2010 at 11:32 pm

    • moondustwriter

      with the economy we may have more skeletons – lol

      August 22, 2010 at 11:34 pm

  4. I suspect soon she’ll be leaning on him – and he won’t enjoy it ;-)
    Nice one.

    August 23, 2010 at 12:55 am

    • moondustwriter

      Ha I love all the quick witted comments

      August 23, 2010 at 8:23 pm

  5. Poor Boney. Looks like she’s had to really cut back.

    August 23, 2010 at 3:39 am

    • moondustwriter

      never want to get that skinny – ha

      August 23, 2010 at 8:24 pm

  6. As usual with you…
    Positive, upbeat, and optimistic.
    You are always a breath of fresh air MDW..,.

    August 23, 2010 at 4:15 am

    • moondustwriter

      well not too upbeat for the poor wife – lol

      August 23, 2010 at 8:24 pm

  7. K

    Shame. Things will definitely not improve for her. Nice one.

    August 23, 2010 at 4:46 am

    • moondustwriter

      I guess it’s too late for self-improvement

      August 23, 2010 at 8:24 pm

  8. I think the bill for a ‘pound of flesh’ didn’t get paid…

    August 23, 2010 at 5:16 am

    • moondustwriter

      that’s a few “pounds of flesh’ please …

      August 23, 2010 at 8:25 pm

  9. i just looked in the mirror…lol

    August 23, 2010 at 5:18 am

    • moondustwriter

      you take care of that wife of yours – even in these lean days

      August 23, 2010 at 8:25 pm

  10. Alas, ’tis always the poor women that suffer. His wee wifey now has much less meat on her bones! That’s poverty for you. :(

    August 23, 2010 at 6:22 am

    • moondustwriter

      in the end men suffer too – kinda hard to cuddle up to a bundle of bones

      August 23, 2010 at 8:26 pm

  11. A Lean Winter, Poor Dear. I hope it’s not too late for the Good Times to return.

    August 23, 2010 at 7:17 am

    • moondustwriter

      it may be a little late

      August 23, 2010 at 8:27 pm

  12. lol. loving all the takes on this one…it has been quite a lean time…but perhaps not that much. smiles.

    August 23, 2010 at 9:16 am

    • moondustwriter

      Smiles Bri

      August 23, 2010 at 8:28 pm

  13. Things may improve in the spring for that guy, but I don’t think his ‘dear’ is going to get any better! Cheers.

    August 23, 2010 at 12:32 pm

    • moondustwriter

      yeh the guy has obviously been eating

      August 23, 2010 at 8:28 pm

  14. What an interesting take on the prompt, Moon!!!
    Too good!!!
    Winter is “lean” indeed!

    August 23, 2010 at 1:24 pm

  15. Spring has sprung already in that house. :)

    August 23, 2010 at 4:29 pm

  16. ah, so true hard times indeed, well said dear xxx

    August 23, 2010 at 4:33 pm

  17. Well said…so sad though:) Hugs to moon!!

    August 23, 2010 at 7:00 pm

    • moondustwriter

      Love to you too

      August 23, 2010 at 8:29 pm

  18. kb

    How come she’s the only one starving? Hehe.

    August 24, 2010 at 5:52 pm

  19. You have met the prompt with excellent prose. Methinks he has been holding on the poor missus. The look on his face says gambling debt!

    I’m groovin’ on Susan’s picture prompt. Perhaps I shall try my haiku hand at it.

    August 25, 2010 at 1:50 pm

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