In Your Dreams … (One Shot Wednesday Poetry)
I wonder…
What would you be doing
right now?
Where would your mind be
taking you?
Who would be wandering with you
in your dreams?
What would you be holding close?
I know…
what you are doing
right now
Your mind is thinking of me
I am wandering with you
in your dreams
You are holding me
close in your arms
That is all that matters …
I am in love with T. Jones and his magnificent photography. He will be featured this weekend at One Shoot Sunday
*http://www.flickr.com/photos/terence_s_jones/4791084511/in/set-72157624459442198/
Come join us this week at One Shot Wednesday where poets converge and share their best. I am inspired by these amazing writers.
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You’ve placed great thoughts in the picture.
August 24, 2010 at 2:16 pm
Remarkable shot!!!
August 24, 2010 at 8:34 pm
MDW….
You know whats great about your poetry?
(Other than its ALWAYS terrific)
You say so very much, without making it an epic read!
This was beautiful…You Rock The Golden State Baby!!
G
August 24, 2010 at 2:20 pm
A woman of few words is that what you are saying!!!!
August 24, 2010 at 8:34 pm
Love the image and the poem is a perfect fit
August 24, 2010 at 2:23 pm
So many questions that seem to resolve with a really cool One Shoot Guest announcement! Great poem, Leslie. Excellent photo as well
August 24, 2010 at 2:31 pm
The choices ..two roads, and always wondering what if I’d taken the other one. There is that constant whisper, “did I choose the right one” even if it was the one less traveled. I like this and that was my take but I have to admit the photograph is inspiring. What is he wondering, would our thoughts collide. Beautifully done. Thank you.
August 24, 2010 at 3:19 pm
Gorgeous photo – the black and white adds such a great element. Really liked the questions in the poem – and the answers
August 24, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Very nice piece of romance to compliment this beautiful photo…blessings…bkm
August 24, 2010 at 3:36 pm
Beautiful photo. You have “captioned” it well.
August 24, 2010 at 3:49 pm
A wonderful poem!
August 24, 2010 at 3:59 pm
and that is all that matters…love the contrast between the first and second part moon…nice one shot!
August 24, 2010 at 4:12 pm
I am wandering with you
in your dreams
Love that line!
Pic is lovely, too.
August 24, 2010 at 5:36 pm
so warm..beautiful..i loved the photo! really one precious moment you captured Moon..yes,it is all that really matters..:)))
August 24, 2010 at 6:39 pm
Rich and sensitive writing. Thank you. – Bill
August 24, 2010 at 6:45 pm
It’s a love dream.
And that photo is something.
August 24, 2010 at 8:28 pm
Eeeck Fireblossom said there are 41 posts on One Shot Wednesday. What day is it again??
I’m hosting so don’t fret if you don’t see me – I’m scrambling at the free throw line.
August 24, 2010 at 8:33 pm
This is gorgeous, what a lovely progression. Nice one shot
August 24, 2010 at 9:05 pm
Oooooh, I like this! The inquisitive tone turns gut-real when the emotion really gets poured out..
I know
what you are doing
right now
your mind is thinking of me…
thanks for the visual slap:)
excellent!
August 24, 2010 at 9:46 pm
glad you could feel it!!!!
August 24, 2010 at 10:16 pm
This lovely reality if replicated in dreams would just be a bonus!
What matters is the reality itself!
Well put, Moon… a sweet romantic touch to an already dreamlike reality
August 24, 2010 at 11:15 pm
I like the bonus round …
moon smiles
August 24, 2010 at 11:19 pm
I really like the photo’s composition, how the man’s body spans the whole of the water, something magical in that And in your words.
Beautiful, Moon!
xo
August 25, 2010 at 2:08 am
I love this photo too. I’m glad he will be featured this week. You ended your poem differently then I thought it would. I love when that happens. Thanks. great poem
August 25, 2010 at 4:31 am
The answers in this poem resonate for me. I love the assurance of loving and being loved here. This really is sweet in an uncloying way. Lovely.
August 25, 2010 at 5:17 am
I really enjoyed this. For me the last line speaks volumes. Great One Shot! Be Inspired Today! Love and Light, S
August 25, 2010 at 6:31 am
You wander in the silence and hear in thoughts what language struggles to paint. We see the picture to hear its thoughts. Thanks for dropping by and commenting on my poem The final seaside trip. I hope you have a good week!
August 25, 2010 at 7:47 am
Beautiful, just lovely!
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August 25, 2010 at 10:05 am
awe that was a sweet poem.
August 25, 2010 at 10:35 am
Now that is a great shot…the black and white really aids in capturing the scene, as well.
As to the poem, Moon, a romantic gesture with a solid progression. Absolutely lovely, and possessed of a warmth that just wants to wrap you right up in its arms…
Hope you’re having a happy One Shot Wednesday!
August 25, 2010 at 10:58 am
Great photo, and you do a wonderful job describing the possible emotions.
August 25, 2010 at 2:16 pm
So romantic…this resonates Leslie. Loved the picture so much. Well done x
August 25, 2010 at 5:24 pm
Beautiful poem. I am always wondering what other people are thinking, if they ever think of me. I liked the confidence of the answer, yes he’s thinking about me. Perhaps on day I’ll be in tune with a special person like that!
August 25, 2010 at 8:21 pm
I love the poem. It is so emotional – very nice!!
August 25, 2010 at 8:45 pm
I loved the picture – hey we make a good team – see ya on Friday and Sunday
August 26, 2010 at 12:09 am
I love the many questions and that you knew what he would be doing at the end made it even better in a romantic kind of fulfillment. Beautiful image and a great oneshot Moon, thanks for the Deja Vu comment at my place, you’re most welcome anytime
Wild Rose~
August 25, 2010 at 11:00 pm
There are those poems you know you have read or lived
thanks sweet rose
August 26, 2010 at 12:08 am
This is amazing because the way it conveys, peace harmony,love and pure intimacy – i can almost hear a piano playing softly in the background as it was read. Wonderful.
August 26, 2010 at 5:16 am
Hmmm – ok will talk to my girl about putting this to music
August 26, 2010 at 4:03 pm
Thought this was going to be a bit of a tear jerker but it all turned out good in the end. I love a romantic poem
Have a great week and thanks for stopping by my blog.
August 26, 2010 at 8:26 pm
I like that you “knew” what he was thinking and didn’t doubt. True love of self and between the couple shines through in your words.
August 26, 2010 at 9:42 pm
when we’re in love, we can think of nothing but that person. the picture goes with the idea very well.
amazing!!
xx
August 27, 2010 at 5:06 am