Dont know what to say (poem)
You answered
but
there was something there
or was there something
missing?
***
It had been joyous
every moment
of every
day
chiding, teasing,
laughing
loving
***
Each moment of each day
beautiful
like a rose blooming
each stage
a new
fragrant
beauty
***
Is this
the brown
dry
about to be
blown away
dead
end
Thanks to : CTwirler12 for the dead rose
*http://www.flickr.com/photos/7407251@N07/1546169250/sizes/s/in/photostream
Dew Rose by L. Moon (Top Photo)
“there was something there
or was there something
missing?”
isn’t it sad when we can no longer see love in its entirety, when the love is wilting, dying?
beautiful way of putting it, moon
love ya,
glittering
xx
August 30, 2010 at 12:44 am
this was a poem that I thought of you while writing – you inspire you know
August 30, 2010 at 1:51 am
oh wow!
thank you so much, moon. you’re wonderful!!
xxx
August 30, 2010 at 6:45 am
You know you give me inspiration when I need it
August 30, 2010 at 8:38 pm
Really enjoyed this poem.
Captured the emotion very well
August 30, 2010 at 1:12 am
thanks glad you could feel it
August 30, 2010 at 1:51 am
I loved it, it reflected the uncertainty extremely well!
August 30, 2010 at 3:08 am
A hauntingly, lovely poem……….
August 30, 2010 at 5:22 am
Thanks Neva – love to you
August 30, 2010 at 8:38 pm
Wonderful embodiment of double messages and ambiguity. So often we have been there. – Bill
August 30, 2010 at 5:38 am
Relationships have all those things don’t they???
August 30, 2010 at 8:39 pm
sad verse moon. you create a tense moment there in the unknowing…
August 30, 2010 at 7:47 am
Thanks – life has those moments doesn’t it??
August 30, 2010 at 8:36 pm
beautiful Leslie – and laugh at me – but i like the dried up rose just as much as the blooming one – i’ve taken some pics of withered flowers myself…
August 30, 2010 at 9:47 am
Sometime it’s easier to live with the dried up flower
August 30, 2010 at 8:35 pm
I could so identify with your writing…full of emotion and sooo true to life and love xx Hugs xx
August 30, 2010 at 1:41 pm
I’ve been hanging out in the mountains the last three days listening jazz and reading poetry on my phone…now that I’m home I get to experience the full beauty of your writing..really enjoyed this poem.
August 30, 2010 at 2:38 pm
After even brown phase, there is a bright yellow!
Well written , Moon… you have so beautifully captured the cyclical nature of life and it’s abstractions…
Lovely!
August 30, 2010 at 5:22 pm
What the others said. Even the contradictory parts.
Just kidding. This was a poignant read, Moon. Love’s a lot like that at times…
August 31, 2010 at 3:51 pm
Black and white / ying and yang huh???
August 31, 2010 at 6:59 pm