Cloud of Pain #poetry
I closed my eyes to shut out raw pain
rejection grazed my heart like a spear
coming too close and spurting the last feeling
I closed my heart a barren shield
dont ask me to ever love again
I’ve felt the cold sting of steel
the remnants of my heart are on your blade
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I opened my eyes and I saw clarity
awaken me from this dream
give me a clear vision
opening my eyes I feel a kiss
something I had for so long missed
a longing for the warmth
the one who had waited in my dreams
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Lovely poetry!
January 16, 2012 at 5:04 pm
I agree with Neva. Very lovely indeed.
I hope the new week is treating you well.
-Jimmy
January 16, 2012 at 6:06 pm
A soulfull and romantic piece of writing here! I really love the feel of your blog. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment on my post!!
January 16, 2012 at 6:35 pm
Lately my own writings have not been of love. Got tired of it–NOT LOVE!! Tired of writing about it–grin!
As a result I thoroughly enjoy reading your ‘stories’ which are momentarily not of happiest moment–true! But love is love, whether thwarted, active, participatory, requited, begun, ended, old, new hot, cooled, etc., etc. And, dear, you write well, of that there is no doubt.
PEACE!
Hope you become a happy peep…SOON!!!!
January 16, 2012 at 7:29 pm
Lovely, emotional write.
January 17, 2012 at 10:26 am
Nicely done!
January 17, 2012 at 6:57 pm
So difficult to let it go and be happy for what you’ve had, especially if one has been betrayed in love but, this teaches us too, to really enjoy love when the ‘right’ person comes into our lives. The heart ache is there to teach, sometimes so easy to blame others and maybe they are to be blamed but, sometimes we also need to dig deep with ourselves for the answers too.
You have and are doing much soul searching for answers which in time will reveal themselves to you in the wisdom of forgiveness and, the freedom in letting go.
Heart felt piece, heart breakingly lovely.
January 18, 2012 at 5:37 am
Hi Moon! great write on the sting & pain that is from love… vivid tale
January 18, 2012 at 4:40 pm