Love Forgotten #poetry

I thought to pick up the pebble of doubt

discovery found it placed in your shoe

I thought to pluck and shake forgetting

insensitivity accompanied the morning dew

I thought to remember starry eyes

in your heart I’m forgotten instead

I thought to look into your winsome smile

a regret that there was “nothing” to be read

I thought to hide the things I missed

in a note you said “I’ve won”

I thought to take back my bleeding heart

alas it was stamped – ”I’m done”

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~ by moondustwriter on February 11, 2013.

Posted in Love, Poetry
Tags: doubt, forgetting, love, moondustwriter, relationship, stamped, unrequited love

10 Responses to “Love Forgotten #poetry”

Seems like a bitter valentine verse….more realistic than most verses in cards.

slpmartin said this on February 11, 2013 at 8:48 am | Reply
- Oh the sappy Valentines are on their way…
  
  moondustwriter said this on February 11, 2013 at 9:43 am | Reply
i love the opening lines to this piece.

nnekaayana said this on February 11, 2013 at 8:59 am | Reply
Ahh unrequited love…..guess we all don’t get what we put out sometimes. Lovely write. Also thanks for stopping by my blog and your kind words! #poeticluv

Kiana@NakedSoulPoetry said this on February 11, 2013 at 9:07 am | Reply
- great to meet you Kiana and read your verse
  
  moondustwriter said this on February 11, 2013 at 9:44 am | Reply
Bitter, beautiful, truthful, painful. Simply lovely!

Nina D'Arcangela said this on February 11, 2013 at 9:18 am | Reply
- sorry the next few days are going to be “romantic”
  
  moondustwriter said this on February 11, 2013 at 9:44 am | Reply
  - Just don’t post in pink, and I’ll survive! LOL
    
    Nina D'Arcangela said this on February 11, 2013 at 4:39 pm
That was a Damned Hallmark moment there, Leslie :0

Loved it!!

Joseph Pinto said this on February 11, 2013 at 10:27 am | Reply
- Oh that’s good. Maybe The Damned should go into the greeting card business…
  
  moondustwriter said this on February 11, 2013 at 11:06 am | Reply

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