Round-about Love #poetry
L’Amour
Love
It was
sequence of mistakes
losing our way without thinking
this love took a round-about of miserable mistakes
mistaken love I’ve taken this roundabout of misery
thoughtless I lost my way
mistook the sequence
it wasn’t
pas
l’amour
Poet’s United Verse First is using the Fibonacci form as a prompt this week. Fibonacci poetry is a literary form based on the Fibonacci number sequence. The sequence begins like this: 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21. In order to find the next number in the sequence, you add the two preceding numbers. The sum of these two is the next number, which then is added to the one before it to get to the next number, and so on.This is how it works:
1 + 0 = 1;1 + 1 = 2; 2 + 1 = 3; 3 + 2 = 5; 5 + 3 = 8 ;8 + 5 = 13 ;13 + 8 = 21 ;21 + 13 = 34…
Love the way you’ve characterized love…and the photo is a perfect match for the poem’s words.
yes I loved the way they went round about – Thanks Charlie…
It’s tough when you realize it wasn’t love !!!
yes – and then you start over hoping it doesn’t bring you back to this same round-about
excellent, i love thoughtless i lost my way, great image
I really like this…very clever use of words…Fibonacci Sequence — sequence of mistakes! I would think this took you quite a while to compose! Very nice.
I like the challenges that come from prompts – this was fun and the nautilus was an additional inspiration
I found this extremely interesting.
FABULOUS! I love the moving out ~ moving in nature of your construction. Your topic and approach are true vistas along the path of life and love for many. So glad you worked the form and shared your result.
Very clever – in a way that doesn’t invalidate but emphasises the emotion.
yes I believe you are right – perhaps some hope there…
this created a round about pulling the love apart
sad but good motion