Sun has vanished
moon peers over the plains
gently she whispers
“where have you gone?”
“Radiating light
to other parts of the world”
He booms
None too quietly
She smiles in her dark solitude
Knowing all is well
He is content
In his world
Even when he is gone
he inspires
She glows with pride
Thanks to Jingle for the Award. I would like to pass this award on to a friend Charles Martin.
You can read his wonderful poetry at http://slpmartin.wordpress.com
Thanks also to RC Designer for the lovely photo at dusk (Lic: Creative Commons)
(http://www.flickr.com/photos/rcdesigner/4070017023/)
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i always love when ppl contrast the sun and moon like you did in lines 1 and 2. i thought it was a good poem. :]
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that was pretty darn beautiful moon…
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you know the sun and the moon have a “thing”
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I love the personalities you gave each one in this. Very fitting. Lovely poem, thanks for sharing. 🙂
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personification is fun to play with
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Very nice Leslie.
… two entities
sharing
one light …
You should see this moon Thursday evening.
Cheers! MrBill (-;
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honestly, i think this is the best poem i have read in a long long time, such a powerful story played out by two everlasting characters…absolutely excellent & please out this up for the Thursday jingle as it deserves so much viewing..cheers Pete
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I felt what they felt. Wonderful.
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Beautiful poem
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thanks for the visit and your comment
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Beautiful indeed. i like the juxtaposition. The photo too befits the Poem….cheers!
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that’s sweet
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ain’t it like a tragic romance that they don’t get to meet?
nice though. i’ve always been a fan of the moon.
-kyogakura
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she sheds tears nightly
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I thought it was really a very good poem and lovely pic 🙂
Very well done!
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just come back and reread it…yep still brilliant
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I posted (for thursday) under your advice my friend
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Beautiful! Reminds me of the poetry of Hafiz and other middle eastern poets. He tells stories of the sun and moon as friends and lovers.
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well they must be friends they inhabit the same sky – lovers on distant shores
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Love t6he conversation and relationship between such strong powers as the sun and moon. And the picture is incredible as well.
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the sun and moon are so accomodating
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A lovely allegory 🙂
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
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thanks for the visit
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Very nice.
Thanks for sharing. I hope you will visit my sites:
Tim Keeton – A Writer’s Tale
and
The Undead Poets Society
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
A Week 19 Perfect Poet Award Winner
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hey how are ya??? thanks for the visit
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a tender poignant enduring romance… well written beautifully told.
Joanny
came by jingle today
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I can relate so much to this poem! reminds me of a lot! I am saving it :-)!!
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awww thanks
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