Desire Unfulfilled (Flash Fiction)


Looking into his eyes

she wanted to comb through his thick hair.

Her fingertips stroked his cheek.

His lips conveyed unspoken love

The top button of his shirt taunted her

“unbutton me

explore”

Desires are taut.

If only he could feel her caress,

return her touch.

Would they ever be free

from his

Coma?

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31 thoughts on “Desire Unfulfilled (Flash Fiction)

  1. This is a sad one but I like it anyway. Should I rant that you made me cry all over my keyboard and now I’ll have to buy a new one? *winks* Thanks for you visit to my 55.

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  2. ok, you got me with that last word…i wonder is it real, this coma, or metaphor…either presents a very different yet just as sad case…nice 55 moon.

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  3. Moon Beam…?
    This was very very touching.
    I loved it!
    Excellent 55…In fact. Perfect!
    Thanks for this little Gem…You Rock.
    Please have a Kick Ass Week-End…Galen

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    1. in a earlier post death and ilenlss is something I feel like we will all face no matter what specialty we choose to work in, but oncology must see more than its fair share of sadness. I have heard from nurses and doctors that they seem to become numb to it or push it out of their minds, but I also think I would have a hard time dealing with it.

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