If I…
Held out my hand
would you grasp it
or push it away?
***
If I…
opened my mind
would you gather my thoughts
or reject my words?
***
If I…
smiled at you
would you draw me close
or turn away?
***
If I…
put my heart in your hand
would you lavish your affection
or spoil our love?
***
I see…
you have
pushed me away
rejected my words
crushed my heart
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Thank you for visiting Moondustwriter. One of the many exciting things I've had the honor of doing is writing with an E. African team that is developing elementary curriculum for African children. As a writer, it is a thrill to help children (on all continents) who want to learn.
I've been part of the blogging community for more than 10 years. Some old timers may remember the award winning (2011 Twitter Shorty ) blog community - One Stop Poetry. I was the co-producer of that fast growing blog community.
I am a published writer, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, blogs and fellow writers.
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ouch. tough write moon…that does not feel good at all…
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the spoils of love and war are tough
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Oct22 Hello! I just want to give you a huge thumbs up for your encellext info you’ve got right here on this post. I will be coming back to your web site for more soon.
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Oh my this one caught me off guard as I got to the end…such heart break and sadness in this one….haven’t read much today since haven’t been feeling well…glad I had a chance to read this one. As always a treat!
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thanks – hope you are feeling better soon
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And are these words not true daily as we continue to trample on one another, and hurt as much as we can. It DOES take at least TWO though!!!
I hope this is not your own present experience. Because it sure sucks!
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trample – good word for love and war
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A sad ending to some important questions. Poignant.
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love doesn’t always have the happy ending does it???
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This just breaks my heart. I so know these feelings. Take care.
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thanks MM pain and suffering makes for good text
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awe the spoils of war. beautifully crafted in poetic form xx
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thanks my sweet friend
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Such poignant sadness…it is truly a tragedy what we can do to one another. Well-written, and well said, in spite of the sorrow the words stir.
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I agree with you – sometimes we don’t even think
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what we can do to one another…
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The end was saddening…lovely!
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thanks E – glad you liked
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