She listened for his voice.
He called, “Where are you?”
The echo seemed to assault
“W_H_E_R_E A_R_E Y_O_U?”
“I’m here,”she called back
“I can’t seeee you,” his words echoed desirous
closer than your next breath”
longing echo whispered in his ear
he could almost feel her
in the echo.
Thanks to G-Man aka Mr Know it All for hosting a great flash fiction each week. We always have fun trying to create a story in 55 words. Come along with us and try your hand.
D sharon Pruitt shared this lovely photo on Creative Commons
“Rainbow Echo” http://www.flickr.com/photos/pinksherbet/3924852858/