The Message is Gone – Flash fiction


He carefully forms his message in the sand

Shells in a heart shape emphasizing

Love ~ devotion

An unexpected wave crashes

Everything at that moment for her is

GONE

 

Each week Monkey Man hosts flash fiction in 160 characters. Like writing a tweet – it takes some doing to convey thought in so few words. Come join the fun!

Redeyed Rich http://www.flickr.com/photos/richu/3301432560

16 thoughts on “The Message is Gone – Flash fiction

  1. Love then is at the whim of a wave. He should have moved the shells high up the beachm it may have endured longer for her. Nice and tight Leslie just as good flash is.

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