words echo art
Shattered pieces of us
unmendable puzzle
love’s memories are left
none remain to hold us
what is left my love?
pieces?
memories?
a calderon of desire on one shore
unspoken words on another
separated by more than space and time
our hearts will never be repaired
shards of love ripped through you and I……………………..
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Leslie,
I really enjoyed this poem. I liked what you did at the end, breaking the words into pieces. It fit well with the poem. Thank you for sharing 🙂
~Corbie Sinclair
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I’m never quite sure how to describe the impact of this poem on me but it was definitely a valuable journey, thank you. ღ
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Wow…what emotions you evoke with these lines and poem structure…very fine poem IMHO.
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means alot thanks Charlie
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That’s a really lovely poem, thanks for sharing.
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At least you are writing well, Leslie. Hope you are feeling well, doing well.
PEACE!
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Beautiful poem, Leslie– puts a lump in my throat for you and all of us. I can identify with the loss, so intensely brought forward in this— xxxj
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les– i just input your link into the widget– don’t know what happened– no other probs reported– check it later–xxxj
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I like how you broke out the words to illustrate the loss and sadness.
You might think of offering this for the PhotoPlay at The High Calling.
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Wow! The sense of loss is so powerfully conveyed and I love the use of form to enhance that. Thank you for sharing it! It makes me want to read more, and more…
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This is gorgeous, Leslie!
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Oh a treat of poetry and visual typesetting! I love it! 🙂 wonderfully done for the words and for the use of the space as a double visual treat!
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Filled with such sadness for what once was. Heart’s in pieces do mend, eventually. The prose and the way you presented it are fabulous.
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“a calderon of desire on one shore” “unspoken words on another”
i love your poem and the emotions it conveys and i think your visual “form” is perfection! i really enjoy doing this type of “word art” too ~ do you know if there’s an actual name for it? this is heartbreaking, Leslie. beautifully written and beautifully laid out. ♥
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love the form as well….haunting words too…
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Thanks sweetie
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