Alone #poetry #photography


empty canoe

No where do I belong

Empty as watery space

Alone a big place

No where do I belong

Alone a big watery space

When you are gone

No where do I belong 

Empty as alone in space

The form base of the poem is the Triolet that I then worked off of to spin integral meaning between the photograph and the poem.

Photograph “Empty Canoe” copyright 2012 L. Moon

Please respect copyright of these original works belonging to artist and poet  ~ L. Moon

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Thank you for visiting Moondustwriter. In 2019, we have an exciting project. We are working with a team developing elementary curriculum for African children. As a writer, it is a thrill to help children who want to learn. I've been part of the blogging community for more than 10 years. Some old timers may remember the award winning (2012 Twitter Shorty ) blog community - One Stop Poetry. I was the (quiet) originator of the idea and co-producer of One Stop Poetry. I am a published writer, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, blogs and fellow writers. There are many facets to this moon - thanks for stopping by.

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    1. There is a beauty in all states of being. Perhaps we should embrace “them” more and fear them less. (Oh no I’m starting off 2013 in philosophical thought)

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  1. Yes, Marybeth, I like this revision. On first rnadieg, I imagine listening to the rain. But when I read it again, I realize that the listening could refer to many things the rain, or music with rain in the background, or listening for a car to turn in the driveway, or This poem expands every time I read it.P.S. Will be thinking of you tomorrow, sending prayers & best wishes your way.

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