Jade Green #atozchallenge #napowrimo


cat eyes

Jade Green

were her eyes

like a feline’s lies

Fire Red

flames she licked

that poured from her lips

Tawny Brown

was her skin

beckoned with drops of sin

Coal Black

was her heart

mine pierced like a dart

Dandelion Yellow

was my skin

poison crept deep within

Verdant Green

was the spot

upon my name the plot

Jade Green

were her eyes

now she wears widow’s disguise

A2Z-2013-BADGE-001Small_zps669396f9 (1)

 

Nautilus

Thanks to for the photograph at shadowstarden  that I altered (a bit) the green eyes were amazing

13 thoughts on “Jade Green #atozchallenge #napowrimo

    1. Jenny,thanks for the visit! a song too? i would prefer it in rock. :DHaikuWater,thanks for vtiiisng! your words will encourage me to post more at the poetry pantry. :)you are right that the subway can be a metaphor for many things: claustrophobia, loneliness, urban life. i am glad that you enjoyed the poem. 🙂

      Like

    1. Hi Tash–the shadows are rellay strong within! You definitely manage to elude them and describe the struggle well. I have such issues that I often think of going completely incognito! Maybe will do someday – when you see the blog DailyDManic–you’ll know who it is! K.

      Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s