fragrant offering
undeserving of soft beauty
I’ve been forgiven
Today at Carpe Diem the prompt is forgiveness. Join us as we delve into the world of Haiku.
Forgiveness #haiku #photography
Posted bymoondustwriterPosted inHaiku, Photography, PoetryTags:carpe diem, forgiveness, haiku, love, moondustwriter, Poetry, roses, undeserved
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Beautiful picture and nice lines 🙂
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you’re not working hard egnouh. I get that, too, but on the other hand, I’m not convinced I can look back at this year and point to 52 distinct things as finished, so if I actually manage this, or even come close? Definitely working!Good luck with your goals!
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A beauty, as always. x
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A fine way to capture the feeling of forgiveness.
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oh my, I think everyone that asks for forgiveness deserves the promise of it.
Your picture and words were so exquisite for the ache and longing of being forgiven.
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I’m so glad you heard the soft meaning beneath the flowers and the offering 🙂
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Beautiful sentiment about forgiveness… often we don’t deserve it, and feel especially loved when we get it!
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I’d go so far as to say that we never deserve forgiveness…which is precisely why it’s called forgiveness.
Exploring Forgiveness
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Beautifully composed haiku on forgiveness and with that photo it makes a wonderful Haiga.
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You picked a right moment to touch on,that moment of being forgiven
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we are all forgiven ~ haiku brings wonderful awareness to the soul ~ well penned ~ carol, xx
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Oh a sweet rose.. very touching.
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Thanks Rebecca. A small child of your own sure has a way of showing you up for the fool you are, if you take my minenag. It definitely gives some perspective along with all the unexpected emotions, well unexpected to some extent, anyway.
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I told my grandmother how you helped. She said, “bake them a cake!”
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That’s a well-thought-out answer to a challenging question
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Hi Crystal, traditionally haiku is coempsod of three lines, with a maximum of 17 syllables. It can be 3-5-3 or 5-7-5. More modern forms of haiku don’t necessarily follow the 3-5-3 or 5-7-5, but they should still be on three lines to stay within the spirit of haiku: a single moment in time captured. 🙂
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