Thunderous my feelings
blue eyes gaze into my soul
weak kneed tremble
thunder sends me reeling
the clouds clap with emotion
caught off guard I tumble
thunderous my feelings
blue eyes gaze into my soul
Triolet:
An eight- line stanza having just two rhymes and repeating the first line as the fourth and seventh lines, and the second line as the eighth.
The Triolet is a fun form to play with as it is short and sweet. I tend to take the primary line (1, 4and 7) and alter the words but not the sentiment. Have a go…
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“The world is but a canvas to our imagination”
~Henry David Thoreau
Where does your imagination take you?????
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Thank you for visiting Moondustwriter. In 2019, we have an exciting project. We are developing elementary curriculum for Ugandan children. As a writer, it is a thrill to help children who want to learn. Along with the curriculum, we hope to develop simple fictions about Uganda for the children to read at school. Trust me books are in short supply. We will use our trusted story tellers: a butterfly and a lion to make the stories come alive. Stay tuned as Bethany and Me put pen to paper.
I've been part of the blogging community for more than 10 years. Some old timers may remember the award winning (2012 Twitter Shorty ) blog community - One Stop Poetry. I was the (quiet) originator of the idea and co-producer of One Stop Poetry.
I am a published writer, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, blogs and fellow writers.
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This is an interesting one,Leslie.
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That one powerful stare.
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Reblogged this on MARSocial Author Business Enhancement Interviews.
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Reblogged this on theowlladyblog.
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Really enjoyed this, and have to try the triolet as well, at some point!
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Positronistic_!
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I like this idea for your A to Z. It’s been so great touring around seeing what everyone is doing. We are getting close to wrapping this up. Been great but I am ready to go back to once a week! 🙂
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