just out of reach
out of breath for trying
you give me quite a race
to the end of the day
*
just out of reach
behind the sun is shining
the outline finger traced
you beckon me to play
*
just out of reach
my will is bent on flying
to meet you in a place
warmed always by your rays
*
*
Yesterday, I chased the clouds. The beautifully outlined clouds held back the sun’s full light.
There are some things you can never capture on camera. A glimpse of heaven I believe is one of them.
What do you chase in your excursions of life?
I am sharing this with Poetry Pantry where this always good poetry to catch.
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We can always imagine catching the clouds even though we know it’s out of reach.In a way we can catch it when it falls as rain, just a thought,Leslie.
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Yes that is so true Ranu. I love the way your mind works
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Oh this made me smile today!!
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Oh Audrey Im glad.
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Love this, so powerful, I would love some feedback from you on what I’ve written it would mean alot if you read my blog 🙂 ✨ this is amazing keep it up 🙂
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nice to meet you. please stop by again 🙂
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I do like the idea of chasing clouds away in search for warming rays. Seems we have done a lot of that this summer, as we have had so many overcast days.
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I think I need a space ship so I dont collide with cars 🙂
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How I adore clouds. I chase them all the time, sometimes in a car full of kids….today I sat with a little one by the side of a lake and we remarked how the clouds were perfect storybook clouds……..I think I could live simply for clouds alone, crossing that blue sky…….
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Sherry I love your spirit. I think if we had moments or hours we would chase many things including critters, kids and clouds…
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Beautiful shot of the clouds ~ Some things are just for our eyes to feast and hold on to ~ Lovely verses ~
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yes indeed. who wants to close one’s eyes when there is sooo much?
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not out of reach for a dragon “he he”
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What a whimsical poem
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Cloud watching is fun and mesmerizing! A lovely verse.
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Cloud watching is fun and mesmerizing! A lovely verse.
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I am constantly pursuing a deeper knowledge of God. I loved the poem it reminded me of that pursuit.
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i love cloud watching especially in the summer. sometimes, i feel they have stories to tell.
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Chase? I like the memories this poem arouses, though i don’t think I chase anything anymore. Maybe a firefly or two, a frog in a stream, a kind of light.
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I love this cloud chasing…a beautiful and uplifting thought indeed….
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The photo is breath-taking and the words well-matched. I like the way you have made use of repetition in each part of the whole.
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A beautiful poem here. I don’t chase the clouds, but often, from my back yard I watch and watch. What I pursue is not heaven but a deeper knowing of what is, who I am, love. I wind up with lots of questions. I really enjoyed reading this.
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I made a mistake. My comment showed as anonymous. I do want you to know I was here though.
Myrna
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Beautiful photo and words. 🙂
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You tell us this is about clouds, and the gorgeous photo accompanying offers evidence thereof. But this poem conveys so much more!
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a race for beauty perhaps and the things ahead. Thanks for your visit Kim!
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I love moving clouds! What a bliss! Sometimes we chase our wellbeing, but really we need less than we want more often…~ Love your poem :)x
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Loved the catching of your clouds. It is so true you can’t always capture the real image even if you have a camera. But the picture will help you to remember the moment.
Wonderful interpretation of clouds and our human desires…catching, chasing them. 🙂
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no kidding. I’m surprised I haven’t had an accident.
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🙂 Thank God, no accidents 🙂
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As I am always a passenger in the car, I watch the clouds change, move, morph into other shapes. Oddly, I find animals in most. i love this poem.
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