Waiting for the Moon #haiku #moon #art


Both grasses and trees
waiting for the moon
dewy evening

© Iio Sogi

dance in moonshine

 

 

Dewy lashes

open to the sky

watery feathers

Dewy lashes                                                                                     close to the sun

close to the sun                                                                             no heat to borrow

lips greet the moon                                                                             last of day

(central haiku)

 

lips greet the moon

lovers reunite

silent song

 

Today  Carpe Diem Haiku Kai  is inspired by Sogi’s Dewy Eve, we are prompted to write a haiku or better yet a troiku (three haiku built off a main haiku) the form created by Kristjaan.

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3 thoughts on “Waiting for the Moon #haiku #moon #art

  1. Definitely something unique in the form you use here. I felt like I was reading various little shadows from one place to another, and I could certainly sense a mysterious flow in these haikus.

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