pierced my heart
archer strains against his bow
can’t staunch the pain
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Alot of depth & intensity in this haiku… absolutely brilliant 🙂
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Yes, sometimes the pain goes too deep to staunch its flow.
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Well done!
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Nicely written Moonie. To give answer on your question Moonie according to the CDHK Kukai, the only rule is that it has to be a maximum of three (3) never published haiku.
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ok will send them on then. Thanks Kristjaan
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You’re welcome Leslie
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