pierced my heart
archer strains against his bow
can’t staunch the pain
The prompt for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is Govinda or Bow
Can’t Hold Back the Pain
Posted bymoondustwriterPosted inblack and white, Haiku, Love, PoetryTags:archer, carpe diem haiku kai, haiku, pain, pierced heart
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Alot of depth & intensity in this haiku… absolutely brilliant 🙂
xoxo
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Yes, sometimes the pain goes too deep to staunch its flow.
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Well done!
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Nicely written Moonie. To give answer on your question Moonie according to the CDHK Kukai, the only rule is that it has to be a maximum of three (3) never published haiku.
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ok will send them on then. Thanks Kristjaan
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You’re welcome Leslie
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