Fragile #haiku


eda moroshi   hi toshi yaburu    aki no kaze

fragile twigs
breaking off the scarlet papers
autumn winds

© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

‘Toshi’ refers to a very fragile paper made in China. The idea of the poem was that even a fragile twig could tear the paper or the twigs were too fragile to hold on to the Autumn leaves.

I think of an old book

had been read for many ages

so aged, yellow and ripped

as I turned the pages

the words I embraced

for a final time they were read

final dust in my fingertips

 open book

A tree long ago

autumn winds flurry through text

words fragile as twigs

Fragile Twigs – a fine prompt from Kristjaan at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

Published by moondustwriter

Thank you for visiting Moondustwriter. One of the many exciting things I've had the honor of doing is writing with an E. African team that is developing elementary curriculum for African children. As a writer, it is a thrill to help children (on all continents) who want to learn. I've been part of the blogging community for more than 10 years. Some old timers may remember the award winning (2011 Twitter Shorty ) blog community - One Stop Poetry. I was the co-producer of that fast growing blog community. I am a published writer, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, blogs and fellow writers. There are many facets to this moon - thanks for stopping by.

16 thoughts on “Fragile #haiku

  1. This is so beautiful Leslie 🙂 loved the comparison of “words fragile as twigs” 😀
    Thought that was really deep! ❤

    Lots of love
    Sanaa

    Like

  2. A tree long ago
    autumn winds flurry through text
    words fragile as twigs

    I just had to reproduce your haiku in my comment Leslie. What a wonderful haiku you have written. A nice little story about how trees become paper … and your words are so true. I have never looked at a book like you have done in your haiku … awesome.
    Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful haiku with CDHK.

    Like

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