Captivated #poetry


between the gate

There it is …

that space

right before the moment…

the thought

“this will never end”

and then I see your eyes

convey I am right

again…

 

Shared with Poetry Pantry at Poet’s United. There is always room for more poetry in the pantry.

 

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35 thoughts on “Captivated #poetry

  1. That space has a tendency to play tricks..when we need it to end it seems endless..when we want it to go on forever it stops…quite a riddle really..and i love the spaces in the story you have left us to fill..it adds to this already powerful poem

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