stolen heart #triolet #poetry

moondustwriterFebruary 14, 2016January 23, 2016PoetryCupid, moondust designs, photogrpahy, Poetry, stole my heart, triolet, Valentine's Day

inside out

Don’t worry I won’t tell

about the way you stole my heart

over romance I tripped and fell

don’t worry I wont tell

over sugary notes I tripped and fell

bloodied by your pointed darts

don’t worry I wont tell

about the day you ripped my heart

I love it when I stumble over a drafted poem. This one penned in 2014 for Valentine’s Day

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7 thoughts on “stolen heart #triolet #poetry”

Mabel Kwong says:

February 14, 2016 at 12:55 am

Lovely poem, Leslie. It all started out very happy but it ended quite sad. Sometimes that is just life and love isn’t always a smooth-sailing ship. We live and we learn. Hope you are doing well 🙂

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Magyar/Doug says:

February 14, 2016 at 6:11 am

Great verse Moonie_!
__In its inspired Cinquain echo, the -New Smile- is that step forward into a heartful recovery.

Old smile
sped into tears,
as you stole my heart song
and tossed it among your litter.
New Smile.

_m

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ranu802 says:

February 14, 2016 at 7:49 am

A very revealing poem, good for you Leslie. It’s great to see how good you are in writing poems. 🙂

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slpmartin says:

February 14, 2016 at 11:01 am

What fun to find those old notes and drafts of poems…enjoyed this one.

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Jonathan Caswell says:

February 15, 2016 at 5:51 pm

Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
YOU LOVE IT WHEN YOUR HEART GETS RIPPED? OH DEAR! SURE HOPE THAT PAIN IN THE YOU-ONOW-WHERE IS GONE BY NOW!

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Jonathan Caswell says:

February 15, 2016 at 5:52 pm

Excellent drama! loved it. any more you’ve stumbled over?

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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:

February 16, 2016 at 1:44 pm

A Valentine poem that was not so much Valentineish… sad really…

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